Sacramento’s Eden, my choice

(Coming soon to a neighborhood blog near you, “How To Skin A Peach” — parental discretion advised.”)

(Until I share the Sacramento poem out loud before audiences, and feel it within my voice, this is my choice version.)

Sacramento’s Eden
(When visiting California’s state capital
I walked up the sidewalk towards the capital
then looked to the left to see. . .)

. . . see over here, here
where soft shadows of morning
float over the silvery wet grass
tall sun-lit trees line a vestibule
where you kneel, stretch out your arms
bring your hands together

touch fingertips to fingertips. . .
here, you pray with your eyes open
in one call to heaven and hell
light and shadows, sin and grace,
all mingle to murmur their vows and
the air waves incense of forgiveness;

Hunch-backed in their green vestments
bushes listen; the asian pear tree drops
one apple; you hear the “thud,”
you turn, expecting to see god.

Final draft as of 9/17/2013
James Ciletti

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About Ciletti

Jim Ciletti, an award winning poet, filmmaker, and author, is the 2010-2012, Poet Laureate of the Pikes Peak region, and for 41 years, poet-in-residence for the Orme School Fine Arts Festival. Jim gives many workshops on the writing and performance of poetry, and makes poetry house calls to create personal poetry events. Ciletti loves everything Italian, including cooking for family and friends, and loves to plant garlic, make homemade wine, and eating peaches and plums. "Everyday is Christmas, but you don't always get everything you ask for. Sometimes more. Poetry celebrates life."
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One Response to Sacramento’s Eden, my choice

  1. This is beautiful, Jim!  You are so lovely to see what you see.

    Love, Mary

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